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« Reply #20 on: August 13, 2010, 07:51:26 PM » |
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-There once was a dark and mystical planet called Tong. -In many ways it was odd compared to our world, the strangest part being the planet only had four hours of daylight per 26 hours. -So, obviously, each hour of light was named for the letters of planet's name, the first hour being called the hour of T, second hour being the hour of O, et cetera, because no one really liked the dark hours due to the fact that during the dark hours, tiny black holes appeared outside and consumed whoever they came across.
-No one knew where these black holes came from, but it was widely believed that they were the work of dark magic. -The Tongianights disliked anything to do with black magic, so in order to counterbalance all of the evil at work in those dark holes, they would hold a candlelight ceremony after the new moon, two hours before dawn -- the darkest hour of the nearly eternal nights -- to pray and scare away the evils of the night. -For as long as they have kept history, these rituals held perfect effect, until the night the new moon did not reappear--the beginning of the time of "pitch." -This was due to a celestial body named "The Novox", A cloud formed by dark forces.
-But in direct defiance to "The Novox" was a bauble pistol collective of incandescent appearance. -This collective, also known as The Wielders of Light, was a small group, once banished from Tong for breaking curfew too often and leading the youth of the planet astray with their hypnotic lifestyle. -Since The Wielders of Light were outcasts, they were the only ones who knew that The Novox was the cause of the dark holes, and soon they would become the saviors of Tong. -The Wielders set out amongst the land to locate a set few, that were able to amplify light. They utilized of the 3 Polarities of the Planet.
-Meanwhile the citizens of Caeruleus, the capital city of Tong, were dealing with failing magical shields -- they too worked from the 3 polarities -- and their city was becoming increasingly vulnerable to night attacks; and to make matters worse one of the five remaining Amplifiers of Light was hours from death. -Luckily, *T* hour was approaching so the Amplifiers could attempt to heal the deathly AMP with the PlusRays. -The plus rays were too much for the Amplifiers' immune system and he died at dawn leaving a talented daughter behind.
-The only problem (a problem the city knew they faced as they fruitlessly scrambled for another option) was that this talented daughter was one of the outcast wielders. -She was called Enigami Rorrim, Class X Bio-Neutro. -Enigami was a unique individual; she was an Amplifier with dormant abilities and a powerful Wielder of Light taught by the leader of the Wielders of Light.
-Because of dormancy, she was undetectable by the collective.
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« Reply #21 on: August 13, 2010, 07:53:31 PM » |
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You guys lost me at "bauble pistol"
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« Reply #22 on: August 13, 2010, 07:57:40 PM » |
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You guys lost me at "bauble pistol"
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You didn't read the response to it? Joe elaborated.
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« Reply #23 on: August 13, 2010, 07:59:59 PM » |
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Wait...how can she be undetected by the collective aka the wielders of light? She was trained by them to be a wielder of light because she's an outcast. Are you saying they don't detect her amplifier power because it's dormant?
Matt, if you just ignore Joe's sentence...it's not so difficult to follow. I recommend reading it out loud several times; that's how I'm keeping on track. Also, Alli figured out that it was a reference to STG. All you need to know is that that bauble **** = wielders of light now. Easy peasy.
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« Reply #24 on: August 13, 2010, 08:05:49 PM » |
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duuuurrrrr.... me no know...
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« Reply #25 on: August 13, 2010, 08:06:22 PM » |
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Wait...how can she be undetected by the collective aka the wielders of light? She was trained by them to be a wielder of light because she's an outcast. Are you saying they don't detect her amplifier power because it's dormant?
Matt, if you just ignore Joe's sentence...it's not so difficult to follow. I recommend reading it out loud several times; that's how I'm keeping on track. Also, Alli figured out that it was a reference to STG. All you need to know is that that bauble **** = wielders of light now. Easy peasy.
 Whoa. You tell him, Kara. Yes. Being a wielder of light and an amplifier is two different things. *gives Kara some +'s*
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« Reply #26 on: August 13, 2010, 08:50:08 PM » |
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Matty:
A bauble is another word for a toy.
Pistol, obviously, is a gun.
Incandescence is a word for shining.
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« Reply #27 on: August 13, 2010, 08:53:32 PM » |
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Matty:
A bauble is another word for a toy.
Pistol, obviously, is a gun.
Incandescence is a word for shining.
I pieced it together eventually. But at first it was such a brain shock... I was temporarily disabled.
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« Reply #28 on: August 13, 2010, 09:01:00 PM » |
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I contributed to the story last, so can we please get another over here to do some? I LOVE THIS STORY!! 
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« Reply #29 on: August 14, 2010, 06:17:49 AM » |
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-There once was a dark and mystical planet called Tong. -In many ways it was odd compared to our world, the strangest part being the planet only had four hours of daylight per 26 hours. -So, obviously, each hour of light was named for the letters of planet's name, the first hour being called the hour of T, second hour being the hour of O, et cetera, because no one really liked the dark hours due to the fact that during the dark hours, tiny black holes appeared outside and consumed whoever they came across.
-No one knew where these black holes came from, but it was widely believed that they were the work of dark magic. -The Tongianights disliked anything to do with black magic, so in order to counterbalance all of the evil at work in those dark holes, they would hold a candlelight ceremony after the new moon, two hours before dawn -- the darkest hour of the nearly eternal nights -- to pray and scare away the evils of the night. -For as long as they have kept history, these rituals held perfect effect, until the night the new moon did not reappear--the beginning of the time of "pitch." -This was due to a celestial body named "The Novox", A cloud formed by dark forces.
-But in direct defiance to "The Novox" was a bauble pistol collective of incandescent appearance. -This collective, also known as The Wielders of Light, was a small group, once banished from Tong for breaking curfew too often and leading the youth of the planet astray with their hypnotic lifestyle. -Since The Wielders of Light were outcasts, they were the only ones who knew that The Novox was the cause of the dark holes, and soon they would become the saviors of Tong. -The Wielders set out amongst the land to locate a set few, that were able to amplify light. They utilized of the 3 Polarities of the Planet.
-Meanwhile the citizens of Caeruleus, the capital city of Tong, were dealing with failing magical shields -- they too worked from the 3 polarities -- and their city was becoming increasingly vulnerable to night attacks; and to make matters worse one of the five remaining Amplifiers of Light was hours from death. -Luckily, *T* hour was approaching so the Amplifiers could attempt to heal the deathly AMP with the PlusRays. -The plus rays were too much for the Amplifiers' immune system and he died at dawn leaving a talented daughter behind.
-The only problem (a problem the city knew they faced as they fruitlessly scrambled for another option) was that this talented daughter was one of the outcast wielders. -She was called Enigami Rorrim, Class X Bio-Neutro. -Enigami was a unique individual; she was an Amplifier with dormant abilities and a powerful Wielder of Light taught by the leader of the Wielders of Light. -Because of dormancy, she was undetectable by the collective.
-Enigami and her fellow Wielders hoped that today they would be able to get inside Caeruleus because they needed the help of her father; they were not expecting the residents to be waiting for their arrival.
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« Reply #30 on: August 14, 2010, 10:13:07 AM » |
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-There once was a dark and mystical planet called Tong. -In many ways it was odd compared to our world, the strangest part being the planet only had four hours of daylight per 26 hours. -So, obviously, each hour of light was named for the letters of planet's name, the first hour being called the hour of T, second hour being the hour of O, et cetera, because no one really liked the dark hours due to the fact that during the dark hours, tiny black holes appeared outside and consumed whoever they came across.
-No one knew where these black holes came from, but it was widely believed that they were the work of dark magic. -The Tongianights disliked anything to do with black magic, so in order to counterbalance all of the evil at work in those dark holes, they would hold a candlelight ceremony after the new moon, two hours before dawn -- the darkest hour of the nearly eternal nights -- to pray and scare away the evils of the night. -For as long as they have kept history, these rituals held perfect effect, until the night the new moon did not reappear--the beginning of the time of "pitch." -This was due to a celestial body named "The Novox", A cloud formed by dark forces.
-But in direct defiance to "The Novox" was a bauble pistol collective of incandescent appearance. -This collective, also known as The Wielders of Light, was a small group, once banished from Tong for breaking curfew too often and leading the youth of the planet astray with their hypnotic lifestyle. -Since The Wielders of Light were outcasts, they were the only ones who knew that The Novox was the cause of the dark holes, and soon they would become the saviors of Tong. -The Wielders set out amongst the land to locate a set few, that were able to amplify light. They utilized of the 3 Polarities of the Planet.
-Meanwhile the citizens of Caeruleus, the capital city of Tong, were dealing with failing magical shields -- they too worked from the 3 polarities -- and their city was becoming increasingly vulnerable to night attacks; and to make matters worse one of the five remaining Amplifiers of Light was hours from death. -Luckily, *T* hour was approaching so the Amplifiers could attempt to heal the deathly AMP with the PlusRays. -The plus rays were too much for the Amplifiers' immune system and he died at dawn leaving a talented daughter behind.
-The only problem (a problem the city knew they faced as they fruitlessly scrambled for another option) was that this talented daughter was one of the outcast wielders. -She was called Enigami Rorrim, Class X Bio-Neutro. -Enigami was a unique individual; she was an Amplifier with dormant abilities and a powerful Wielder of Light taught by the leader of the Wielders of Light. -Because of dormancy, she was undetectable by the collective. -Enigami and her fellow Wielders hoped that today they would be able to get inside Caeruleus because they needed the help of her father; they were not expecting the residents to be waiting for their arrival.
-Although,*O* hour began its end, With the most neutral rays that help reset the shields.
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« Reply #31 on: August 14, 2010, 11:55:49 AM » |
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Her dad can't die twice; I already killed him off. Also, how can she be traveling to the capital with the other wielders if she's on retreat?
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« Reply #32 on: August 14, 2010, 02:31:32 PM » |
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Her dad can't die twice; I already killed him off. Also, how can she be traveling to the capital with the other wielders if she's on retreat?
I got confused with the location of her father. I made an oopsy. I'll delete it. ++++++
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« Reply #33 on: August 14, 2010, 09:01:13 PM » |
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-There once was a dark and mystical planet called Tong. -In many ways it was odd compared to our world, the strangest part being the planet only had four hours of daylight per 26 hours. -So, obviously, each hour of light was named for the letters of planet's name, the first hour being called the hour of T, second hour being the hour of O, et cetera, because no one really liked the dark hours due to the fact that during the dark hours, tiny black holes appeared outside and consumed whoever they came across.
-No one knew where these black holes came from, but it was widely believed that they were the work of dark magic. -The Tongianights disliked anything to do with black magic, so in order to counterbalance all of the evil at work in those dark holes, they would hold a candlelight ceremony after the new moon, two hours before dawn -- the darkest hour of the nearly eternal nights -- to pray and scare away the evils of the night. -For as long as they have kept history, these rituals held perfect effect, until the night the new moon did not reappear--the beginning of the time of "pitch." -This was due to a celestial body named "The Novox", A cloud formed by dark forces.
-But in direct defiance to "The Novox" was a bauble pistol collective of incandescent appearance. -This collective, also known as The Wielders of Light, was a small group, once banished from Tong for breaking curfew too often and leading the youth of the planet astray with their hypnotic lifestyle. -Since The Wielders of Light were outcasts, they were the only ones who knew that The Novox was the cause of the dark holes, and soon they would become the saviors of Tong. -The Wielders set out amongst the land to locate a set few, that were able to amplify light. They utilized of the 3 Polarities of the Planet.
-Meanwhile the citizens of Caeruleus, the capital city of Tong, were dealing with failing magical shields -- they too worked from the 3 polarities -- and their city was becoming increasingly vulnerable to night attacks; and to make matters worse one of the five remaining Amplifiers of Light was hours from death. -Luckily, *T* hour was approaching so the Amplifiers could attempt to heal the deathly AMP with the PlusRays. -The plus rays were too much for the Amplifiers' immune system and he died at dawn leaving a talented daughter behind.
-The only problem (a problem the city knew they faced as they fruitlessly scrambled for another option) was that this talented daughter was one of the outcast wielders. -She was called Enigami Rorrim, Class X Bio-Neutro. -Enigami was a unique individual; she was an Amplifier with dormant abilities and a powerful Wielder of Light taught by the leader of the Wielders of Light. -Because of dormancy, she was undetectable by the collective. -Enigami and her fellow Wielders hoped that today they would be able to get inside Caeruleus because they needed the help of her father; they were not expecting the residents to be waiting for their arrival.
-Although,*O* hour began its end, With the most neutral rays that help reset the shields.
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« Reply #34 on: August 15, 2010, 08:38:43 PM » |
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I feel powerful. XD
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« Reply #35 on: August 15, 2010, 08:40:27 PM » |
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I feel powerful. XD
You sure about that?
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« Reply #36 on: August 18, 2010, 04:44:42 PM » |
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Ive been gone for 3 days and no one added to the story?  +++++++++
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« Reply #37 on: August 18, 2010, 05:15:41 PM » |
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I personally want to run some asteroids into the world and end the story, but that wouldn't be very fair.
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« Reply #38 on: August 18, 2010, 05:56:49 PM » |
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I personally want to run some asteroids into the world and end the story, but that wouldn't be very fair.
I could end the story for you.
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« Reply #39 on: August 18, 2010, 07:31:54 PM » |
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well for the first time i have to use em  -------------
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